Capricorn's battle I (2010)- full story

The story is not recommended for younger than 12 years, potentially violent parts, mild profanity
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Chapter I

 This story doesn't have its time, it can be always: in the past, present, future. Therefore, I call this story timeless. Also, this story will not have a place, at least speaking about the place of the main event.

In one place in western Moldova, with her family, some friends and relatives, a girl named Holly lived. She lived in a house with her father, a younger brother and a little sister and she remained without a mother when she was thirteen years old. She was taking care of the house and was a substitute for her mother to brother and sister. Holly was withdrawn, silent, stubborn, but also witty when she felt like it. She wore a blue blouse with long sleeves, a brown pants made of a thick material, ribbon in hair with red crossed lines, her eyes were olive-green and her hair was long, dark brown and wavy. Since she was thinner, her bony structure was more noticable.

 The main person in the village was Raul, who was bad to the inhabitants of that village, demanding from them all things: to give him a tax every month, to give him a third of their harvest from the field... Now, he wanted Holly for a wife, just because that she was an unconquerable fortress and she refused all who wanted to be with her- she only watched her family and herself, without interfering in someone else's life. When Holly refused him several times he kidnaped her family.

 Holly (goes into his house): "Where are they?" "Speak before I cut off your throat!" (takes a dagger from the covers attached to her belt) "Raul (laughs):" Don't you see my people around you? They could shot you, it's only enough to say them to do it. " Holly (spreads her arms): "Fell free to do this, but let my family go." Raul: "You have two options if you want to set them free : 1. Become my wife, or, 2. Find these people from the list (throws list before her feet) and bring them to the place that I wrote you. " Holly (abstracted): "But, these people live in different parts of the world!" Raul (indiferent): "Yes, so?" Holly: "I do not have money to travel around the world! We barely have money for living." Raul (gets money and gives her) Here. If you do not complete the task, your family will be killed. " Holly (sad): "Like I have another choice."

Chapter II

 The next day she went on a journey. First she went to Hungary to find Maya, who lived at the foot of the mountain Bükk*. She is a person of large blue eyes, long brown hair tied in a braid, a little chubby with curves. She wears a white dress with a blue lace on the sleeves and around the neck, she is Taurus, the stubborn, sensitive, loves to prepare various treats for herself and others.

 Holly continues the journey to Slovakia, where she met Julia on the Slovak Ore Mountains**. Although she also lived in a small village her intellect was impressive. She was similar to Holly, at least as a matter of being silent, but Julia was a bigger perfectionist and some small, seemingly insignificant things could have been occupied her for hours. She was dressed in a pink shirt and a black skirt to ankles, her hair tied in the tail and moved over her shoulder, her eyes are deep and blue, her hair is dark.

 Returning to Romania, in Transylvania, Holly found Irina, a gothic girl who lived near the castle of Vlad Cepes. Irina is a Scorpio, got brilliant power of acution, believes in ocult and is interested in psychology and magic. Wears a long dress with a corset, long gloves and a black "collar" necklace, her hair and eyes are also black. She doesn't laugh a lot so Holly, Julia, who is Virgo, and her were similar in that. As they went all together Maya wanted to laugh more, because the Tauruses are by nature a talkable persons.

 In Greece she found Marel- an active girl who likes to explore the world around her, who likes to be at the center of attention, but she is also just. An Aries, dressed in a white sweatpants and sleeveless shirt, her hair is light brown and has light green eyes. Her hair is tied to look like a horns of ram and the rest is falling down the back. She is a sporty girl and has athletic structure.

 They thought Marel was a too talkative but on arrival in the United Kingdom they realized that they were wrong: Elena, the next girl, did not stop talking! The cute blonde of bright eyes, dressed in a simple green dress, was Gemini. Funny, talkative , acute, but also somewhat irresponsible Elena joined the group.

 Holly did not really understand why these girls were on her list, but the desire to release her family was so strong that she did not care.

From Britain they returned to France to find Loren. Loren lived in a luxury villa. On the first sight arrogant, she was actually person who wanted the admiration of others, but she knew to show that she was with her friends and that she was solid. Zodiac Leo, dressed in a short dress that made her curves stand out, she has a lush red hair of medium length and wear gold jewelry.

 They flew from France to Mexico, where the group got another member, Florel. Long black hair tied to a casual bun, dressed in a dress with red and yellow layers, Florel was one of the prettiest girls in her place. She owned a dance studio and liked to dance and she highly appreciated dance as a form of art. Born as Libra, she is indecisive, righteous, gentle, great aesthetics.

 In the United States, Chicago, a red-haired girl with glasses Tali became part of this unusual group. Another intellectual person, but unlike traditional Julia an modernist.Tali worked in the company and was dressed in a gray blazer and a skirt to the knee. Aquarius, talkative, free spirited, somewhat cunning and generous with friends.

 In Australia they met the cute girl Rani. She is short, with orange hair, dressed in a white shirt and red skirt to her knees, while her hair was tied in two tails and made her round face even younger. Zodiac Cancer, Rani had changing mood, but basically she was a gentle and sensitive girl, a child in the soul and again, at other times, like an old person. She is shy, lenient to others but not naive, because never forgives betrayal and then turns into a beast which wants to revenge.

 On the Java island, in line from the list given by Raul, they came to Anja. This secretive person, with deep blue eyes and straight blonde hair of medium length, wore a blue-green dress and flat footwear. This mysterious person was Pisces, romantic dreamer, vulnerable, sensual, art lover.

 The last person on the list was a tall girl with long blonde hair tied in ponytail-Beli. She lived in Egypt, wearing capri jeans trousers (3/4) and an orange t-shirt and she wore sneakers so she wouldn't look taller. She is optimistic ( sometimes too much), loves traveling, freedom but, unlike most of the Sagittarius, is not a fan of animals and loves to hunt them.
Since the Sagittarius see life nonchalant, like the game, while the Capricorns are too worried about various things, and with that first ones are optimists and others realists or pessimists, Holly and Beli could not agree from the beginning. There were various argues among them and most of them were Marel and Irina, Rani and Florel, Maya and Tali, Loren and Anja, Julia and Elena. There was still the question: Why did they have to come here?

 Evening, the girls sit around the fire and talk and Holly looks at the fire numbly. Irina (coming): "What kind of dissaster made you to search for us?" Holly: "Raul. I do not know just why he wanted to bring you all. Nothing is clear to me." Irina: "Raul?" My uncle had some work with him and has been missing for years. "Holly:" Do you think other girls have something to do with him? " Irina: "Very possible."

 Holly (standing up and addressing everyone): "Do you know this man? (takes the picture out of the bag)" Loren: "I was in relationship with him for three months. He was boring and thought that he can control me ... ha, surely. Then he returned to Moldova and we have neither seen nor heard since." Tali:" He tried to embezzle money through our company, I personally told him I would report him ." Elena: "That's the one who drove on the opposite side of the road so I hit him with the car, then he swore a lot, even though I paid him a damn and that was his fault!" Anja: "While on the island, he had big disputes with my father."

Holly: "Was he really in touch with all of you? I mean, I know he's rich and has several houses around the world, and he also traveled to various places, but ..." Rani: "He saw me when I saw that they beat someone. I thought that he did not see me! I'm afraid. " Beli: "I mocked him when he came to Egypt ... a really silly man." Florel: "I would not say that he was silly, I reported him when he was harassing dogs on the street! How can someone hurt an animal? " Marel: "My friend went against him... (looks down)... he was very close to me... he was..." Maya (sobbs): "My fiancé was last seen with him and afterwards they found him dead. " Elena: "I'm all suspicious of this." Julia: "He had a disagreement with my family. I think he lured us into some sort of trap." Beli: "Come on, it's absurd! Why would he lure twelve girls to this place just to get revenge?" (Goes to the tent). "Marel:" Maybe she's right, it's really illogical. "

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*The Bükk Mountains (Hungarian: [ˈbykk]) are a section of the North Hungarian Mountains of the Inner Western Carpathians. Much of the area is included in the Bükk National Park. On Serbian we spell it as Bik, same as zodiac Taurus and bull, so I used it as Maya's place for living.
**The Slovak Ore Mountains (Slovak: Slovenské rudohorie) are an extensive mountainous region of Slovakia's Spiš and Gemer region, and in small part in northern Hungary, within the Carpathians. It is the largest mountain range in Slovakia.

Chapter III

 Having understood in the meantime that each of them was a representative of a each Zodiac, they divided the tents according to the elements of their signs. Earth signs, Julia, Maya and Holly, although they all had a strong temper did not have problems with each other. Water signs, Rani, Irina and Anja, because of their sensitivity did not have much disagreement, thought that all three of them had a changeable mood here and there. Good or calm atmosphere prevailed in the Air's signs tent and in the "Fire" tent there were sparks from time to time. Air signs, Tali, Elena and Florel, would mainly lead some conversations that were in the domain of philosophy, which Julia liked too. Fire signs, Beli, Loren and Marel, maintained relationships in the normality but their quarrels were harsh and short. Loreen mostly complained about the conditions of camping, Teli to the lack of internet, Maya on a uniform diet, Rani on the fear of Raul, Julia on the lack of books, Florel missed her boyfriend ...

 They all had some of their little interruptions, but they waited patiently when they would be told the reason they were here, even they were afraid that it would not end well. Only Holly was afraid whether Raul would hurt her family, and for her life It was not so much worry.

 They took tasks: Marel, because of the best physical condition, decided to go for the woods and in the meantime she would exercise in nature, Julia maintained cleanliness in the camp because she was annoyed when there was a lot of mess, Maya prepared lunch, which would sometimes do Anja or Florel, who brought water and similar supplies.Holly went to less accessible places for forest fruits and herbs, Rani hunted fish, Tali and Irina guarded camp because of Raul, Elena was company to Marel and Loren made the melems in case someone was hurt. Although the animal lovers of the camp warned her, Beli was hunting animals in the forest. Holly loved animals and hated their killing- she even avoided maximally eating meat and was ready to fight with those who wanted to hurt them.

 One day Irina noticed suspicious people around the camp and informed others, and Holly then went and told the others to be in the camp. Beli did not listen and went behind her, sneaking.

Holly got close to one of them, bound his hands and began to question: "You work for Raul? What's happening in the village?" Man: "I do not know ... (bringing a dagger to his neck) Your family is in jail and he got some of your relatives, and told us to liquidate all twelve girls. " Holly: "Get out of here and take the other people with you. If you say something to Raul, I will not kill you quickly, but slowly that you can die in the greatest pain." After that, the man went to another direction so Beli, wanting to find out in what kind of relationship is Holly with Raul, intercepted man and asked for information and, when he refused, she threated him with an arrow. Before a man said something, Holly went behind them so Beli put on arrow down and, without a word, gone to the camp.

 In the evening, Holly and Beli looked at each other and, if eyes could kill, they would probably kill each other that evening. It was only needed a small argument for bloodshed. Nobody even suspected what would happen next day ...

Chapter IV

 There were a lot of argues that day and even some small things caused strong arguments. However, the worst quarrel was about to happen.

The mother hind went through with her fawn. Beli pulled out an arrow and a pointed it to her target, but Holly quickly pushed her aside, so the hind and fawn escaped.Beli: "That should have been our lunch!" Holly: "How can you be so insensitive, do you think this fawn would be fine without mother? "" Beli: "Is it important, anyway, someone would have caught him one day too." Holly: "That's it, I can't stand it anymore! I challenge you on a duel!" Beli (laughs): "Okay, but you do not have chance-arrows have a stronger range than dagger."

 The others gathered to separate them, but in vain. Julia: "You have no chance, she can easily hit you and you have to come close to her to hurt her." Rani: "Do not lose your heads for nothing!" Florel: "The conflict does not lead to a solution." Marel (Beli): "Calm down, do not enter fight, it can not end well!" Anja: "Let's just forget everything and ..." Holly and Beli together: "No!"

 Holly stood thirty meters away from Beli. Maya (scared): "She's not normal, this will kill her!" Loren: "I can not watch!" Tali: "Oh, damn, this will not work out well." Irina: "I have some strange feeling about this fight ..."

 Beli threw the first arrow but Holly caught it, which was also working with other arrows. She was approaching her, making Beli more and more nervous. There was another arrow left and Holly was already close.

 At a distance of two meters, Holly paused. The next arrow hit her ... in her heart!!! Her blue blouse became bloody and the girls from the camp started screaming and crying. Marel approached Beli, who apparently was not even aware of what exactly happened. However, one thing was still strange: Holly stood still as a statue! She was not much worried about this lethal injury, but she pulled out the arrow, covered wound with her hand and suddenly healed and the blood dissapeared. Beli loses her balance and falls on Marel's arms and then Holly throws an arrow and says, "A real warrior does not kill when he does not have to. If I wanted to kill you, I could do it any time, but I do not want. I'm tired of deaths." - after which she went to the tent. Irina: "What I told you, this is very strange, my feelings are correct." Tali: "But, how ... this messes up with logic!" Julia: "I agree, this is impossible!" Elena (to Beli): "Beli, you almost killed her! Leave the quarrels!" Beli (thoughts): "This is not over."

 In the evening, Holly sat beside the river on a big stone and looked at her reflection in the river. She saw only one sad girl without anyone... How to release her family from Raul? What if Raul hurt them ?! Thinking about it, she started crying. She was not crying often, but she could not stand it anymore. "Are you okay?" said Florel, who had not talked to her much until then. Holly (wiping tears): "Yeah, everything is fine." Florel: "We all have a weakness, do not worry. I can not believe what happened today, how did you do it?" Holly: "I do not know, it's been dragging me to do it ... I do not understand either." Anja (coming): "Maybe it's power?" Holly: "I do not believe in magic so much, but this is certainly not normal."

 In the morning everything was like before. Beli was annoyed because her friends stood on the Holly's side and planned revenge.

With the Water and Earth signs Holly already was good with, and now she was also good with Elena, Florel, Tali, at the moment with Marel and Loren.

 In the evening, while she was sleeping on a stone near the river, Beli pulled out an arrow and point it to her. Marel (coming): "Beli, what are you doing ?!" Beli: "Marel, I'm not... This is not what you think. .. "Marel:" I'll tell everyone for this! "Beli (point to the arrow on her):" You won't. " Holly (puts the dagger white under her throat): "If you kill her, I kill you." Beli (lowering the arrow): "Why do you act like hero when you're probably working for Raul and want to kill us all ?!" Holly (slaps her): "You think I'm working for a man who captured my father, a brother and a little sister? You think I'm glad I'm here while they're in there in who knows what kind of conditions? Are you able to understand someone else's problems? (going away) "Marel:" I'll forgive you if you apologize to her tomorrow. " Beli was left alone near the river.

Chapter V

 In the morning, Beli went for a walk to clear brain from the fire that was in her for no reason. The people of Raul were intercepted and kidnapped her, then taken to Moldova, and they left Raul's letter which Loren found near the camp and brought to others.

 Maya (reads): "Dear future wife Holly, how's it going? I heard that you collected all the enemies in one place, I am amazed by that! Your family is fine except that your sister is a little ill... very nice child, too bad she will die soon... (Holly cries)... unless you and your, I hear, buddies, do not come here and surrender. Oh, you have a three-week deadline, I do not like to wait long. By the way, I captured some more people from the village, I want to make sure that NOBODY will help you. If you don't succees, my dear Holly, you will be able to enjoy the wonderful bloody massacre that I will arrange only for you." Rani (shaking) :, , What a monster! " Loren: "We have to go there!" Julia: "We will not arrive in time!"

 The unusual light is created near them. Twelve zodiac signs appear before them. Tali said, "This is a game with all the laws of logic!" Zodiac Aries: "Your encounter activated the ancient power of the zodiac." Z. Saggitarius: "Even my zodiac will complete when she fulfills the task." Elena: "What kind of task?" Z. Scorpio: "To get your zodiac power, you have to fulfill the task." Anja: "What is this about?" Z. Cancer: "You'll see on the road, and now you have to go."

 They didn't wait too long-they picked up things, packed tents and set off on the road. On the day after zodiacs met them again. Z. Aquarius: "It's time for you to discover tasks-each of you will have to overcome your faults." Z. Virgo: "We chose one of each what we agreed to be the most annoying in each of you." Z. Taurus: ,,Depends to whom. "Z. Capricorn:" If you complete the tasks by the end of the road you will get power, if not you will not beat Raul. " Z. Libra: "Cardinal signs: Aries, Capricorn, Cancer and Libra must be released from or to mitigate- Aries must stand out less, Cancer needs to better control emotions, Libra reduce the wish for prestige, Capricorn decrease ambition." Holly :, What kind of ambition? " Z. Capricorn: "You have to understand that you can't do it all by yourself, that you don't have the strength to do all of that." Holly (angrily): "I've managed everything till now and ..." Rani (to Holly): "Yes, but you see that you could not beat Raul alone. You are strong, but sometimes you have to let someone else in your life. "Holly (murmurs):" Damn it. "

 Marel: "What do you mean, I stand out? It's not true!" Z. Aries: "Let others say something, you will see that there is a world completely different from yours." Florel: "I do not understand my task." Z. Libra: "Beauty is not the most important thing, nor the most expensive stuff. You will have to learn to save." Florel (disappointed): "So much about these shoes I planned to buy this morning." Rani: "As I understand my task, I have to take some medicine or something... I can not control my psyche, for God's sake!" Z. Cancer: "You just have to behave mature, that's all." Rani: "Only that. (ironic)"

 Z. Pishes: "Fixed signs: Taurus, Aquarius, Leo, Scorpio, must be released from or to mitigate-Taurus must be more moderate in everything, Aquarius must moderate egoism, Leo must reduce admiration towards itself, Scorpio must become less morbid."

Tali: "I am egoist? I'm just sharing an experience." Z. Aquarius: "But you think that only your way is right. Nobody denies your qualities, but sometimes you are not right and that's it." Loren: "How can I reduce admiration for myself and expect it from others when I know how much I'm worth? " Z. Leo: "All people are the same and everyone is worth a lot in their own way." Irina (in a deep voice): "Being less morbid ... does it even exist?" Maya: "At least you do not have to be moderate ... I'm not immoderate, I'm just a gourmand." Z. Taurus: "Sometimes it's not possible to live in abundance to which the Tauruses have got used. You do not have to give up anything, just be moderate. " Zodiac Scorpio: "There is no need to be optimistic as a Sagittarius, but too much darkness is not always good for you."

 Zodiac Sagittarius: "Changing signs: Sagittarius, Gemini, Virgo, and Pisces must be released from or to mitigate-Gemini controlls babbling, Virgo obsessivity, Fish superstition, Sagittarius hypocriticy."

 Julia: "I knew it." Elena: "Do I really talk so much?" Z.Gemini: "It's also true for revealing secrets. Sometimes it's better to remain silent." Z. Pishes (to Anja): "Your task is actually to be more realistic and look the world around you." Anja: "I did not bother my inner world either, it's very nice in it." Loren: "Only Beli can not complain about hypocrisy." Z. Saggitarius: "She will only complete the task if she is really sorry for what she did."

Chapter VI

The girls came to Europe. Florel: "Oh, my legs hurt! Why we didn't go with plane, but we have to ride buses and ships and walk from town to town?" Tali: "It's because nobody listened to my proposal. " Elena: "We'd better get a taxi." Julia: "Do you know how much it would cost? Three tours multiplied with twenty euros are sixty euros and it was eighteen times we walked from town to town... " Irina:" If this sun is not so shiny, it would be a pleasure to walk." Marel:" We are now near Greece, which reminds me to tell you about ... (continues) " Maya:" Soon will be the time of lunch, we should stop." Rani (weepy):" I'm being nostalgic for the house. " Anya: "I'd love to swim, I miss water." Loren (looking at the mirror): "Oh, I have to fix make-up! I can not go like this, we have to stop."

 Holly (stands in front of everyone): "You know what? Maybe you should return home, I can handle this anyway. I did not even have to accept the damn challenge, but I had to obey and accept marriage. Who am I kidding... I'm just one person who tries to fight for her goal by all forces and keep falling over and over again. You come back, I will surrender." Irina:" You can not surrender without a fight! We will succees! " Rani: "Come on, if you stop what are we going to do? Here, I will not complain about nostalgia." Loren: "It does not really matter to me that my make-up is perfect." Maya: "Well, there won't be a world's end if we delay lunch." Anja: "We have to beat Raul, swimming can wait." Julia: "I'll leave trifles away, it's not the time for that." Tali: "My idea didn't make sence, I understood it now. " Marel: "We have to get there for the good of us all." Elena: "I apologize for being boring during the trip." Florel: "Frankly, it was fun for me when we drove with that little boat. I know that my friends would shake their heads at everything, but it was fun. It did not bother me even to carry that ugly life jacket. (Laughs) "

 Suddenly, their clothes began to change and they felt something strange in them, and then they realized that it was power. Holly: "I feel incredible power... How that we got the power when we didn't do anything?" Anja: "We just defeated our faults." Marel: "It would be great if we could get to Raul." Irina: "Beli represents the ninth Zodiac house that represents travels, I don't know if she has got power." Rani: "I have an idea. The fourth Zodiac house is home. Holly, take my hand (Holly does that), and now create a mental picture of your village." Holly: "Do you have it?" Rani: "Yes. Get everyone's hands, let's go over there."

 They found themself in the cemetery. Tali: "This is some mistake." Holly (approaches one grave): "It's not a mistake. The fourth house represents home, fertility, moon, the birth... and the mother. She's here." Loren: "I'm sorry. How long has it been?" Holly: "Ten years, she died when she gave birth to my sister. Come on, we're going to the village to save people from Raul, and with them Beli and my family."

 In the village, everything was deserted, as if there was nowhere else. Marel: "I would say that people have left ..." Maya: "Didn't they capture everybody ?!" Julia: "Judging by the fact that only noise is heard in the east, I would say that the village is completely empty." Holly (turns to the east): "This is his palace. He got rich with our work and afterwards he traveled the world and done other jobs. Are you sure you want this? " All together: "Yes!"

 Raul (to Beli, sitting in the main room): "Your friends don't come for you... Maybe they don't care about you. You are just an stranger, and for me you are the person who has embaraced me in front of my friends. You see, you mean more to me. I'll give you back what you did to me, because I lost a business offer worth three million euros! " Beli (laughs): "Just that? Ha, would not even worth if you have lost one billion." Raul (shouted): "What do you know!? You talk much.Would be better if they kidnapped someone else, you are annoying since they brought you here. You are babbling about beliefs that they will come for you, and do you see them? Do you see them ?! " Beli (looks behind): "Yes."

 Raul (turns and sees eleven girls behind): "How did you get so fast, what the hell ?!" Florel: "Magic." Holly: "Leave the prisoners and we will not hurt you- if you refuse, you are dead." Raul (pulling the pistol on Beli's head): "Same as her (Raun's people surround them) And you will not get better either. Holly, I realized something important- I don't love you anymore. For this reason, but also because you became a friend of my enemies, I decided to kill you, and then your father, your brother and, finally, your little sister. " Holly (shakes): "Beli, just say that you are sorry, but honestly, from the heart, and I'll forgive you." Raul (laughs): "Oh, farewells, I love listening to them, of course, if I am the one who holds those little pathetic dying creatures in his hand. " Beli: "Yes, I'm sorry, honestly. It's been a moment of rage, but now I calmed down and realized I was wrong."

 As Raul laughed, Beli transformed, joined the others and said, "How are we going to beat them ? " Irina: "With the power, of course!" Julia: "We will succees." Marel: "We must succeed, otherwise we are done!" Together: "Join the ancient Zodiac's powers, connect the constellations into one. The Power of the Aries, the Power of the Taurus, the Power of the Gemini, the Power of the Cancer, the Power of the Leo, the Power of the Virgo, the Power of the Libra, the Power of the Scorpio , The Power of the Sagittarius, the Power of the Capricorn, the Power of Aquarius, the Power of the Pishes, destroy the evil! " Then a huge whrilpool was created that took Raul's people, and finally Raul himself, before it had dissapeared.

 Behind the heavy metal doors that opened with difficulty, although there were twelve of them, there were many corridors. There were dungeons with people from that village. Maya (to Holly): "Go find your family, we will take care of the rest."

 In one of the dungeons, Elena noticed someone known to her. Elena: "Oh, for God's sake ... Eliza, why are you here?" (Opens the prison) "Eliza:" I went to look up for you, and that maniac captured me. Are you okay? " Elena: "Yes, I was worried where you are!" (Huggs her) "Florel (approaches):" You two really look alike! " Elena: "This is my twin sister, Eliza."

 While others opened other dungeons, Holly began running to the furthest to find a family. The people were happy to see her but she did not have the time for them to thank her because she had a bad feeling, so she just continued to run. In the last dungeon cry was heard,so she thought "Just make them all be all right." She saw three familiar faces.

Chapter VII

 Holly: "Father!" (Eyes full of tears) Are you all right? "Holly's brother:" Our sister has a fever, this is the third day that the fever breaks her... She can't survive like this too long! " Holly (opens the dungeon and takes a sister in her arms): "Come on, hurry to the exit, I'll bring her out."

 Raul's house began to ruin. Loren: "Damn, we will not succeed!" Tali (by holding the construction): "Come on, we have to make it, just hurry!" Julia (opening the last dungeon): "Quick, that's it!"

 Holly asked for her friend, Doctor Mor. She left the sister with Maya, hoping to find him in a crowd of frightened people. Beli(ran): "I heard about your sister, is it urgent?" Holly: "Yes ." Beli said her to wait there, and,after a few minutes, she brought the doctor. The doctor gave the girl a syrup to lower the temperature and then Holly wanted to take her home, but ...

 Maya(shocked): "Do not tell me this is your house. Oh, they ruined it! What a monsters!" Holly (tries to get alltogether): "Damn it. We do not have time for weening now, I have to put my sister in bed ..." Holly's cousin approaches: Holly, honey, put her in my place, come on! When I heard that Raul would ruin your house, I took the key and transferred lots of stuff to my house. (they get in.) We will build you a new house, you saved everybody from that monster!" Holly (quietly): "Thank you for everything, that means to me and my family very much." Holly's cousin: "Do not thank me, that's the least I can do!"

 Holly finally embraced her father and brother. The girls helped people to return to their homes and Beli was happy that all was forgiven to her. They settled in people's house and stayed in the village for a while.

 Holly's sister sat, a bit sad, on the bench in front of the house. Rani: "Hey, Princess, why are you sad?" Girl: "My doll was destroyed, my cousin didn't have time to take it and now I do not have any dolls to play . " Rani: "We were in town today and bought you something nice." Girl: "A doll?" Elena: "Not one, but thirteen, and every of them looks like us and have the same clothes, thanks to Loren." Loren: "I hope you like them!" A girl (smiles): "They're beautiful, I'll keep them until I'm alive!"

 Holly sits by the river,Irina approaches: "Why are you sitting here alone, in the village is the celebration in our honor!" Holly (pensive): "My family is good, it's my greatest happiness." Irina: "Hey, I recognize the darkness from the inside, I see that something is bothering you. Tell me." Holly: "I feel so empty-at one point completely filled by the desire for something, now it's like I don't know why I am here. At age thirteen I have become a substitute for my mother to brother and sister, I feel as if this is my only duty-sometimes I feel trapped in all these norms that my mind attaches. I love brother and sister more than anything, but I am not their mother. I will never be. I am only someone who also needs someone. Sometimes I remember her and I realize that I'm missing her and that I'm still that girl, completely lost like the first day. Raul ruined our house in which were all the memories related to her; there is no more kitchen where she made me vanilla cookies, there are no doors where she waited for me when I come back from school, there is no more room in which she sung me a soft lullabies ... (cries)" Irina (hugged her): "For everything there is a positive and negative side, but you will remember all those memories in your brain, nobody can destroy it. I believe that it is difficult for you. Take it easy, you will find the point again, you are Capricorn, you always find that something that is worth fighting for and come out as winners in the end, don't you?" Holly (cheers up a little) : ,,Yes that's right."

 After a few days, the girls thanked Holly and the villagers and then they went on their way.

 Every year, on the June 15th, the girls gather at the place where everything happened, where they spent their days preparing for the battle. Everything is remembered, but only one should be forgotten and these are quarrels. The twelve Zodiac signs, twelve different personalities, now work as one. Now we leave them, in their place that I will not mention, in this timeless story.

              End 3.2.2017 18:00
          Suzana Ristić Suza
             (original written somewhere in April 2010)
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Disscusion

 Analyzing the old stories, I came to the conclusion that the ,,Capricorn's battle" should have changed due to some mistakes,so I did it. Automatically, it meant that I had to change the second part, but much less than the first. The characters are the same, the action is mostly the same as in the original, but now I've learned more about zodiac signs and I could make it up to the story.

 In this part a little more sense is added, a part from the end is depicted which then described what happened to them (since most of the things in the second part did not happen, but it turned out that I wrote in vain), changed the description of characters Marel, Rani and Julia to be more accurate to their astrological profile ... Now I was able to make the story more calmer since the original was written before the eighth grade excursion, therefore, before the end of the school year and final exams, and maybe I was not the most concentrated during the original.

The most of outfits are kept from the original except: Marel had a white shorter dress, Julia long pink dress, Anja turquoise skirt and upper part as a mermaid (something like a shell), Rani white shirt and red shorts. In the first part their tasks were different and less related to the story, and the fixed signs did not do the task, which was not exactly right. This is definitely better and shows that, whatever the sign, we all have our own virtues and faults.

The second part of the ,,Capricorn battle" will come soon 😊