The Black Follower- Evil is Eternal (2018) - full story

The story is not suitable for under the age of 17: it is a horror story, contains a disturbing scenes, but also somewhat more explicit scenes, scenes of gruesome murders (more brutal and more frequent than in the first part).
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3.or 4.1.2018

 The full moon again illuminated the Earth's globe, wordlessly standing in the sky and watching the people below. Once again, it shone with a bloody glow, with a ghostly silence announcing a catastrophe. The ritual begins.

 The Black Follower came out of her cold chamber from which the scent of blood spread and went to the place of the ritual, where she called her ruler. "The last attempt failed, the four stupid ones had too many humanity within their brains. I didn't have the opportunity to again find a completely merciless creature who will not reverse the magic spell... I need a monster, someone who doesn't own the soul, someone born to kill and who drinks blood instead of water. The time is to be created here and now, under the lap of this bloody moon. My army of death will finally become a reality. "

 The fire got stronger and the Black Follower glanced toward the pit that spread in front of her feet.

"Four beings straight from hell,

which will become people's last farewell,

with this moon I invite evil to me,

ARMY OF EVIL- COME TO ME!

Helpless people in the spider's web choke,

the chains of iron their bones broke,

freeze everybody of the human kind,

make them completely lose their mind!"

The fire completely covered the pit and the four silhouettes came out of it, with completely black pupils and then approached the Black Follower.

 The tallest creature had the name Frea- snow-white hair, slightly longer than shoulders length, was falling behind. She had a short black fur skirt, black fur boots, a fur top over a chest and a scarf that, as it looked the same as that top, felt over her right shoulder. She had black fingerless gloves on her hands. She had the power of freezing and used it for the purpose of torturing and killing others, didn't have emotions, she was insensitive, completely empty.

 The creature with a long black hair was called Weber. Unlike Frea, which had the black snowflake mark on the right side of the upper part of the stomach, Weber had a black spider on her left shoulder. She had a top with a corset, a necklace with ornaments of spider web, lace gloves to the elbow with the same ornament and short boots with a smaller heel. She can create a spider net.

 The next was the Lunata. She was dressed less provocatively than the other three, wearing a black short sleeved dress with white collar, black shoes, an unoburstive gold necklace, two ribbons on her arms, her hair was curled and platinum-blonde. In her hand is the clock with which she brings mental chaos to the victim, leaving it in a complete disarray.

 The shortest is Chaina, she got her name by the chain around her neck and arms. Her hair is longer, tied in a high tail, brown color. She has a mark on the lower right part of the stomach, wears a short sleeved top that reveals the stomach, short shorts and half-boots. Easily gets angry and rage is her driving force.

 They stood in front of the Black Follower. Black Follower: "I don't expect much from you, just have fun. Capture who you want, kill as you want, I only know that we will kill a hundred people in the mistress's honor- that's her command. It's necessary at least that much so the Army of Evil would rise and rule the world. Go."

 A man in his forties returned home about three in the morning and, tired, headed for the bed. Not turning on the lamp he headed for the bedding when he heard a voice behind him: "Isn't it a little late to sleep?" He winced and saw Frea. Man: "Who are you, how did you get into my house?! I'll call the police." Frea: "There is no need; I will do it for you ... after I freeze you to death! (freezes him and a man dies from hypothermia) "

 Weber (walking down the street): "I desperately need to eat someone's spinal cord and drink their inside... (sees a lonely woman)... and I just found my delicacy." She approached her, bond with the spider web and pressed along wall. The woman resisted, but Weber added the web until the woman fully plaited in it. Weber: "Do you know what a spider does when a fly gets caught in the web? Drinks it while only a shell doesn't stay out of it. (makes a hole in her head and began to drink her interior) "

 A twenty-five year old guy walked along the river and noticed Chaina and, delighted with her look, approached her closer in hope to meet her. Chaina waited for it and caught him with chains, breaking his bone by bone until he died in severe pain. Leaving the corpse, she only laughed and said: "They don't call me Bonebreaker down in hell for no reason. This was so relaxing."

 The full moon was still in the sky, only significantly lower. The old-woman woke up for about four o'clock in the morning and cut vegetables for salad, not knowing what the horror was waiting for her... Lunata appeared out of nowhere. The old woman (screaming): "You are a ghost! Help! " Lunata (waves a clock in front of her):" You haven't seen me, you are silent and listening to orders. " An old woman: "I'm listening to orders ... (lost)" Lunata: "With a knife you hold cut off your finger." The old woman did it without words, bleeding on the work surface. Lunata: "Cut off all the fingers on that hand." The old woman did it and started bleeding even more. Lunata: "Now eat them all." Completely under the influence of hypnosis, the old woman began to swallow her own fingers. Lunata: "Write your favorite poem on the wall with your blood." Lunata disappeared and the old woman wrote verses on the wall, until she completely bleed.

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 The new day came. Two girls of twelve and ten years turned TV on. The first girl: "Give me a remote, Leonora!" Leonora: "No, you're going to play annoying shows about the celebrities again! I'll tell Mom you're obsessed with that. " First girl: "I'm not, all the girls are watching that! Give it to me!" Leonora: "Mom, Bianca wants remote again!" Fighting over the remote, they pressed the button for the program with news, and their mother entered the room. It was Margareth.

 Bianca: "Mom, Leonora is boring!" Leonora: "You are boring!" Bianca: "You are!" Margareth: "Easy, we'll find a compromise." Speaker on TV: "A series of horrible murders in the city- unknown perpetrators killed three people, for the fourth it is determined whether the crime was committed. Man T.P. was found frozen in his apartment, I.K. it was found with all broken bones ... " Margareth (sitting on the couch):" Children, go to the room, you don't have to listen to such news. (they leave) " Speaker:" ... Woman P.O. was found in an extremely creepy state, all internal organs, blood and muscles were, in an unexplained way, drawn through a hole on the head, while for the fourth person are still not shown the causes and circumstances, the investigation shows that the old woman cut off her fingers and they were found in her body. There are no traces of crime for now. "Margareth:" Oh, for God's sake, how creepy ... Maybe it's just coincidence or ... (shivering) She's back ..."

 The next night the moon was slightly smaller, but equally red. It was time for new human victims.

 Chaina first started her feast, capturing a young man and a girl in the park. Girl (to young man): "I told you this was a bad idea! We would better go to my place." Man: "Come on, there is an whole hour of walking to your place! What do you want from us, you freak with the chains? " Chaina: "Nothing specific, I'll just rip off your limbs and make a nice sculpture, it'll look beautiful under this bloody moon." The girl (screaming): "No! Oh, you can't do it to us!" Chaina (naughty smile): " Of course I can. I'll enjoy in it. " Man (to girl) "You see she just freaks us out, don't be so dramatic. (Chaina approaches him) What, do you think I'm stupid enough to believe you are you going to do that ... (Chaina rips his arm off with one move, the girl began to scream, a young man cried in pain) AAAAAAAAAA! My arm! You ripped my arm! (ripped off the other arm) Stop it! Stop it! " Girl (petrified with terror): "Oh, this can't be happening! This is not real! "Chaina: "Of course it's real (takes her arm and abruptly pulled, ripping it) this is a great morbid reality. Take now your arm (gives her), I'm going to finish him off first. " They both screamed in agony until they bleed to death.

 Lunata had a whole spectrum of creativity in front of her, she wanted to take as many people with her so she thought of how to do that. On an empty road was the bus, all passengers were sleeping in it except the driver who had to stay awake. Lunata appears next to him. The driver (wondering): "I don't remember seeing you at the station ..." Lunata (waves with a clock): "Listen to me, you're under my control. You see that bridge? Hit the car on it and turn to the river. " Driver: "Turn to the river ... (lost)" Lunata disappeared and left a bus that, along with two more cars, for several minutes was in deep water. The number of victims has risen drastically.

 Frea came to the factory where the workers worked the night shift. Worker 1: "I can't wait for the vacation to rest!" Worker 2: "What's wrong with this place, it's always quiet here." Worker 3: "Too quiet, it got boring." Worker 4: "You would like to be paid for nothing, huh?" (Laughs) "Worker 5 (listening):" Do you hear something? "Worker 6 :, Something is heard from the refrigerator, isn't it a malfunction? " Worker 7: "Let me take a look, it may have broken down ..." He opened it, there was nothing. Worker 8: "There must be mice. We have to tell the boss that we have rodents or something." Frea (appearing from nowhere): "I'll take it as an insult." Worker 9 (frightened): "Where did you come from?!" Frea: "From your the biggest nightmares." Worker 10: "Come on, girl, get out of here, dress something because you're going to get cold in that! Look how she went out!" Frea: "It's never cold for me, I'M THE COLDNESS." (makes a circle of ice and captures all the workers.) Who's now freezing, huh? Not me. You, on the other hand, are. " She froze their heads, then smashed them, leaving the frozen remains of the skulls behind.

 Weber wanted to kill a lot of people at once, but her power usually killed one person in a very brutal way. She made a vast web in which she led the people and mummified them in a spider web where they died from lack of air. She would take only their hearts and ate them, leaving the rest in the woods. Chania crippled and killed several more people that night, not lagging behind the rest.

 Black Follower (at a gathering): "I'm amazed! You're incredible! In only two days you killed fifty people! Fascinating. I'm really thrilled with you." Frea: "It was a pleasure to smash their skulls." Weber: "I was just feasting with delicacy." Chaina: "We'll make further progress tomorrow." Lunata: "We just started, I can't wait to bring discomfort to more souls."

 The next day all news again reported about the brutal massacres. Citizens became paralyzed of fear. Margareth was sure this time that Black Follower found her army and that the big danger is after them. She had to settle with the others what to do so she went to them. First she went to Lauren.

 Lauren (opens the door): "Come in, Margareth, I'm glad to see you! You must have heard what was going on in these two days, terrible!" Margareth: "Of course I did, the whole city is talking about it ... I think that She is responsible for it. " Lauren: "That's what I thought too... It's terrible to know who did it and yet we can't do anything." Margareth: "What do you mean, we can't do anything? Only we know who are we were dealing with! " Lauren: "Because of that wraith my husband thinks I've tattooed "Dear Lauren "on my shoulder, let alone what we went through while we were under her influence! I became a vegan, I could never again look meat with the same eyes. I'm afraid. " Margareth: "I'm afraid too, but I'm much more afraid if she will want revenge and it seems like she will try to destroy our loved ones again." Lauren: "You're right, we have to go to Daniela and Mery. "

 Daniela's office; Daniela: "I am in. We have to stop her. We need a good plan, anyway we are just mortals fighting against the demon or whatever the Black Follower is. We can't just find her, we have nothing to attack her with." Lauren:" God, we didn't even think about it ... We're done! " Daniela: "We're not, I'm just saying we need a plan. She certainly has a weakness." Margareth: "Light is not her weakness, the bus ride took place during the day." Lauren: "Hawthorns and holy water!" Margareth: "It works on vampires, she's not a vampire." Daniela: "Maybe Mery has an idea, let's go to her."

 Later, Mery: "No, no way! I finally made my life and I won't lose it! What you suggest is equal to a suicide, I won't do it." Daniela: "We are the only ones who know who she is, she will continue to kill people if we don't stop her. " Lauren: "It's just a matter of time before she comes to us." Margareth: "Everybody is talking about the events of the past two days." Mery: "How do you get the idea that it's her work, huh? Like, maybe it's not her, maybe some 'psycho' went to kill people, what, these things happen." Margareth: "The psychopath doesn't freeze people's head, nor makes holes through their head and eats everything except bones and skin! That's her, only she could do it! " Mery: "And what can we do there? Like, there's no way I'll join you in fighting this nasty wraith. No freaken way."

 An hour later, in Daniela's office; Mery: "I can't believe I'm doing this. (grumpily) " Daniela:" We have to act quickly, she'll probably kill tonight. " Lauren: "What if there is an army?" Margareth: "We'll get them first." Mery: "Okay, I'm sorry if I'm going to sound crazy, but- how do you mean to make it? You know, I'm really interested." Lauren: "Let's see who we're dealing with, so we'll improvise." Mery: "Oh, well, I'll go right after to buy a coffin for myself, I'll also reserve it for you if you want." Daniela (stood): "Let the Black Follower choose the coffin for herself, she will be the one that will die. It's time to become the killers again. "

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 Night is here again. Mery: "Why are we dressed up like the killers if we no longer have the evil power?" Daniela: "In order to strengthen self-confidence, Black Follower will think we are strong again and that will give us strength." Mery: "Of course when you don't wear this baggy dress full of blood stains, duh." Lauren: "I'd love to switch with you, I'm embarrassed to wear this." Margareth (hears): "Somebody's coming! Be ready." It was only a woman of thirty years, walking on a deserted street. Lauren: "It's just an ordinary person, not a Black Follower." Daniela (stunned): "Look out behind her!" Margareth: "It's not her, but what is it ?!" It was Frea, icy as the coldest chamber of the criminal mind. Margareth: "Let's go!"

 The woman got scared when she saw the tall creature of the white hair behind her and began to scream, the girls ran and stood in front of her to protect her. Mery: "Okay, what now?" Frea: "Five at once, great. You saved my time. " Daniela: "We were there before you, there is a way to resist ... The Black Follower can't control you." Frea: "She is my mistress, but she didn't create me. I was created by the Fallen himself, so I don't have the mercy like you ... You are wearing these costumes, what will you do? To scare me? I would laugh if I had emotions. " Lauren (to woman): "Do you have a lighter?" Woman (frightened): "Well ... yes, surely." (gives her a lighter) Who is this? " Lauren: "We don't know yet, but I know how to get her away."

 She took a branch and burned it, making an improvisational torch. Frea (step backward): "Do you think your torch will scare me? (freezes it with power) I can destroy you with one stroke of my hand, but I don't doubt that the Black Follower wants to hear that rebels have raised their voices. (disappears)" Mery:" Oh, great! Now she will kill us all! " The woman (still scared): "Who are you? Is it the one who kills people in a brutal way?" Margareth: "You have to go home or anywhere safe, it's dangerous here." Mery: "Yes, and now it will be even worse, since we've gotten her mad! Ma'am, come to our funeral, because the wraith is gonna kill us." Daniela: "Don't tell others about this, we will try to solve this ... I hope that we will be able to. "

 Going back, they kept silent until Lauren interrupted the silence: "Equivalence. Balance. I think I know." Margareth: "What is it?" Lauren: "We need white magic, equivalent to black, so we will win." Mery: "It's crazy." Daniela: "I know it makes sense, but where will we find such a powerful spell?" Mery: "Are you saying to look for help in the church?" Margareth: "They would not even want to hear about this. After all, if it were vampires, it would be easier because we know what destroys them, but this is more than that." Mery (makes a phone call in the distance): "Yes . Yes. The fastest you can. Bye. (ends) Dina knows about the witchdoctor, she comes to take us to her. Maybe we'll get the answers. "

 Although it was late woman hadn't slept yet, she let the girls in. Witchdoctor: "This will be the hardest thing in your life. You say that this wraith froze- it takes a huge fire to destroy her, in a special place and with special spell. The other three ..." Margareth:" There are three more? " Witchdoctor: "Yes, unfortunately, at least that's how I see it. One has a spider tag, her threads must be taken. The other is wrapped with a chain, she should be suffocated. The third one takes control of the mind, you shouldn't look at the pointers." Mery:" And that lunatic who called them? " Witchdoctor: "Cut her head off when she's the weakest." Lauren: "Eww. Eh, when it must be, it must be." Daniela: "(skeptically) I don't know; it's hard for me to believe that." Witchdoctor (gives her a talisman): "I know you don't believe in it, but put this around the neck, you will need it." Daniela (puts a talisman around her neck): "Let it be." Witchdoctor (when they came out): "If you need help, just call and I'm there." Mery: "OMG, you can hear when we call you? (astonished) "Woman (smiles):" I thought over the phone. " Mery: "Oh well, yeah, it makes more sense."

 They weren't aware that the enemy was waiting for them right at the corner.

Black Follower: "Well, well ... my old acquaintances. The little bird told me you disrupted her at work ... (starts to smack) pathetic but surprising. I've got a better army than you, they don't have that stupid feeling of love inside them. Get to know my army: Weber, Lunata, Chaina and, as I heard, you already have met Frea. " Mery:" What a trash outfits, as if they were ... not wraiths. " Black Follower: "Well, which one do I tramble first? You can also choose how you want to die."

 As she spoke, Chaina and Daniela gazed at each other. Even though the Chaina's eyes were completely black, something was dragging Daniela towards her ... She stepped forward in front of the others and said, "All this was my idea, I convinced them to attack you. They didn't want to hurt you but I made them, so you should only capture me. "Margareth:" Daniela, what are you doing ?! " Lauren: "Are you insane?! They'll kill you!" Mery: "Whoa, girl, what are you doing?!" Black Follower: "Chaina, put chains on the prisoner, it's time to go." Daniela subtly winked at the others before she was taken.

 It's dawning. Lauren: "What did this wink mean?" Mery: "Maybe she will look the situation closer, I don't know ... We can make a pyre for that icy one. What will we do with that Marilyn girl? The spider one is too creepy for me. " Margareth: "We will hardly get closer to Chaina, we won't be able to suffocate her." Lauren: "We have to take away the watch Lunata carries and to destroy it, and to Weber we must ... take her threads away?" How are we going to do that? Margareth: "Let's split up - let everyone concentrate on one so we won't bang our heads around the other three." Mery: "Okay, I'm in. It seems to me that Daniela observed Chaina, maybe she would strangle her. The three remain. " Lauren: "I'll take whichever, I don't care." Mery: "I'll take Lupita." Margareth: "Lunata?" Mery: "The one who makes people silly, well- that one. I just have to take her watch, destroy it and that's it. It will be quickly." Margareth: "I'll take Weber, she's complicated one." Lauren: "Then I'll take Frea. I hope Daniela knows what to do."

 Chaina (walking in front of chained Daniela): "So, you were Dark Daniela? I expected someone like you." Daniela: "In what sense?" Chaina (approaching): "Fearless, wild ... It would be a shame to kill you." Daniela: "Anyway, I am unarmed." Chaina: "I'm just imagining that scene of fresh victims tied to a chainsaw, their screams ... You must enjoy it." Daniela: "I enjoyed watching them looking at me knowing that I would never be theirs." Chaina (even closer): "Sounds interesting... (moves her finger over her arm)... I love seeing such a strong girl, along with so attractive... (Daniela starts to breathe deeply and Chaina moves chains from her with light movements)... then show me what you didn't show them." Daniela (put her hand around her waist):" With pleasure. "

 Completely forgetting that she was in the clutches of the enemy, Daniela forgot that she could end Chaina's existence, but indulged into a passionate kiss. They both took off their tops and then Chaina noticed Daniela's talisman. Chaina: "What's this?" Daniela: "A necklace bought in a shopping mall ..." Chaina: "It's beautiful. It suits you well. I'll leave my chains down ..." Daniela: "No, they feel so good on a warm skin... (pulling Chaina shorts down, after which she did the same with her leather trousers)" Chaina (descending on the floor):" I'm amazed by you, Dark Daniela. I thought you were a weakling from inside, but you are a real beast. (moves hand over her body while Daniela gone across her shoulders with tongue, and then all the lower)" Daniela:" Oh, yes, I am Dark Daniela ... The Beast ..." (continue)

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 Lauren was preparing the wood for a big pyre, along with the witchdoctor. Lauren: "I just don't know how to lure it inside the fire. If it doesn't light up fast enough, she will freeze both fire and us. We need a shield so that she can't freeze us." Witchdoctor: "I have a spell for it, but I don't know how to call her here when the time comes. We should bring more wood, for creature from the cold part of hell a campfire won't be enough for destruction, we have to burst fire."

Margareth tried to remember any of threads on Weber, she didn't know what that should mean. Threads ...

 Mery was ready to wait for the evening, thinking that the Lunata was easy to beat. She only needs to take her watch. Here, take the watch, crush it, the end! Of course, but sometimes the shortest path is the most dangerous one.

 With the arrival of the evening, the massacre could begin. Chaina left Daniela in the underworld and walked her way, just like the others.

 The city, scared by the events of the past two days, was devastated. Several people who didn't believe it were ideal for wraith's goals ... Group of youngsters went to the nightclub. They were not aware that they would be witnesses and actors of horror. Weber was a hungry of victim, so a group of six guys and girls were a delicacy.

 Getting closer to them, she caused laughter of the group. Guy 1: "Hey, the Halloween is for a few months." (Laughter) "Girl 1:" What a Gothic Costume! " Girl 2: "Totally trash- sure you're a vampire. They're all masked in the vampires." Weber (throws  spiderweb on them): "Actually, I'm a spider who is very hungry." Guy 2: "What is this, it can't be removed!" Weber: "Spiderweb. A lovely, sticky spiderweb I wrap around my victims before I eat them." Girl 3: " She is just kidding us..." Weber approached her, made a hole in her skull and, in front of of the horrified observers, drank her inside. She did it with another girl and guy, and then she felt that someone behind her sweeped with something and cut her hair up to her shoulder. Margareth stood behind her, dressed like The Killer Margareth, holding the scythe in one and Weber's hair in her other hand. Margareth: "I cut off your threads. You don't have powers anymore." Weber (initially confused and then laughed): "You think power was in my hair? I have the power of a spider, I'm not Sampson. You stupid creature, you're next on my list! (disappears)."

 Margareth looked at the other three members of group and remained shocked. Margareth: "Bianca, who let you out?" Bianca: "Mom, why are you dressed like that? What is this? I want to go home! (through tears)" Guy 1: "Mrs. Margareth, can you get us out of this spiderweb?" Margareth: "Good." (to Bianca) You'll explain a lot to me, young lady. (cuts off through the web with scythe) Run home, don't say that you saw this wraith. I'm afraid it can come back. Hurry! " Bianca (going with her ): "How do I get this scene out of my head? Why are you wearing that stupid costume?" Margareth: "This wraith was created by the same person who made me a serial killer, but my love for you and your sister saved me. I had to cut off her threads, I thought it was her hair ... I made mistake." Bianca: "Okay, now nothing is clear to me. You have to explain the situation to me." Margareth: "First you explain what you were looking for in front of the club." Bianca: "Okay, it's not like I have a choice."

 Mery found the Lunata who had just finished with her victim, leaving it to kill another person because of hypnosis, and then came to her. Mery: " Hey... Lupata, I came to defeat you. It's best to give up and spare yourself a fight." Lunata:" (confused) Have I been hypnotized you or have you already lost your mind? " Mery: "Hey, don't insult! All you know is to move the clock left-right, let's see you in the real fight! Let me see you, come on! " Lunata (still confused):" You are very confusing. I can make you lose your mind with one stroke of my hand and you're still here? Let it be. (takes the clock and waves it.) " Mery forgot to turn her eyes off the clock ...

 Lunata:" You are now Bloody Mery, the nightmare of all children. Go! "Mery, under the influence of hypnosis, started her own bloody feast.

 Daniela woke up on the floor covered with a blanket, without clothes. The Black Follower enters. Daniela: " Where is Chaina?" Black Follower: "On her assassination mission. I see she liked you." Daniela (squeezes blanket tighter): "Why do you need to kill so many people, what do you have of it?" Black Follower: "In order to bring my mistress to Earth, then evil will prevail on the planet." Daniela: "You have nothing from it." Black Follower: "What do you mean ?!" Daniela: "Evil is attracting you because there is good, so you have something to fight for. Without a good on the planet evil would be a constant, which would in fact be a monotonic image. This is how the world is kept in balance." Black Follower: "That would mean my death, also the death of my mistress - I won't allow that. " Daniela: "Then stop, find another purpose!" Black Follower: "I am made of pure evil. The only purpose I have is evil."

 She came out of the room and Daniela quickly found her phone, then called someone, "Come on, pick it up ... Hello, William, it's me. Today I won't be able to come to work, I'm sorry." William (her boss and friend) : "Where are you, I've been worried about you all day! Are you okay?" Daniela: "Yes, for now ... Listen to me, find one of the three persons I told you about, Margareth, Mery or Lauren, tell them I'm fine." William: "Where are you?" Daniela: "They will explain everything to you, take care. (The battery is completely empty and the phone turns off)"

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 On the field Frea finally appeared, Lauren called her. On one side was a witchdoctor, on the other Lauren, while Frea was standing in the middle. Frea: "You really want to play a corpse in the snow, don't you?"  Witchdoctor: "Now!" At the same time the fire started to blaze and the witchdoctor began to cast a spell, while Frea began to age and decay, but she was still alive, she had enough strength to escape.

 Lauren ran to the witchdoctor: "She is still alive! We were close to succeed and we have make her weaker, but she still lives! " Witchdoctor: "Um, it seems that we have damaged her from outside, but something is missing from the inside. Tell me, what were you doing while you were Dangerous Lauren? " Lauren: "Cooking and burning people, then I would get their heart out, why?" Witchdoctor: "Maybe we have to destroy her from within." Lauren: "Emotionally weakened, isn't it? Her indifference is equal to emotional coldness."  Witchdoctor: "Exactly! Who do you love most on the world?" Lauren: "My husband." Witchdoctor: "I have an idea."

 Chaina (returns): "Daniela, your friends tried to kill others. That means you lied!" Daniela (approaching her): "Wouldn't you like to be the main one?" Chaina: "Well, yes ... if they are not there then I will be the main distributor of horror and doom. Still, it doesn't change the fact that you betrayed the mistress." Daniela: "Mistress? I thought you were a mistress here...You're much more capable than the Black Follower, plus much more hot... (kisses her) ... do you agree? " Chaina: "You bought me ... it's good that at least you are unarmed, but the danger is exciting." Daniela: "That's why I am here- I had the chance to escape, but I didn't. I want you." Chaina (takes her clothes off): "I also know that you have nothing to hurt me with except with your attraction. You belong to the underground now." Daniela (does the same): "I've never had such a good time in my life."

 While Bloody Mery was looking for her victims, Margareth discussed the strategy with Bianca. Bianca: "Maybe threads of the clothes? Maybe she should remain naked?" Margareth: "I don't think that's it." (sees a biology book on Bianca's desk) What do you study now? " Bianca: "Animals, from birds, through insects, arthropods ..." Margareth (excited): "Arthropods, of course! I have to find a part about them ... (searching through the book) Here they are! Part of the body that produces the spiderweb are the glands, but I don't know are these threads right ones... "Bianca:" You cut off the limbs, right?" Margareth: "What it has to do with this?" Bianca: "Body-legs. Compare them. With spiders the legs, ie, the ends seems like threads, against the body. Anyway, there may be either trachea with which they function, or a bloodstream. Everything would be solved if you cut her off into pieces ." Margareth: "No matter how creepy it sounds, I think you're right. You just figured out how to get rid of that hellish creature. I'll try tomorrow night with that."

 Dina searched Mery through GPS and got shocked when she saw her, she could say almost daughter, as a killer. Dina: "Come on, Mery, we have to go home!" Bloody Mery: "I'm Bloody Mary, I have to I kill someone. " Dina (calls Lauren): "Something weird happened with Mery, it's like she's under hypnosis!" Lauren: "I'm coming right now, it sounds like Mery overestimated her possibilities ... Surely Lunata hypnotized her! I'll bring the witchdoctor, we will solve the problem, just watch her not go away. "

 Mery had an empty eyes, completely white pupils, numbly looking in front of herself. Witchdoctor: "I was afraid this could happen, she didn't listen to me. She looked at the pointers." Dina: "How can we get her back to normal?" Witchdoctor: "She has to look again at watch, but it has to knock backward." Lauren: "We need to take that watch as soon as possible- her duty as a Bloody Mery was to kill children with a knife... We can't let it happen again ."

 Soon Margareth came, as well as William who asked for an explanation of where Daniela was. She was like a daughter to him and he was very worried about her. The rest were relieved that they at least heard she was good.

 "Yes, oh, yes, yeees...oh ...Chaina ..." - echoed the room. She didn't think about the battle and the army of evil ... This was her the wildest adventure in life. The chains were falling over the Chaina's neck, seamlessly embraced her body. Daniela wanted to return back for her pleasure, so brought her face closer to Chaina's body, holding one hand on her stomach where it was a massive chain. From the great enthusiasm, Chaina didn't even notice that the chain was more and more squeezing her neck, Daniela also didn't notice anything. Chaina's voice was no longer heard, so Daniela lifted her head and was scared. "Chaina, Chaina ... Damn it, the chain has suffocated her... The only thing that could have killed her .. I didn't want to kill her with the chain! Chaina...  in vain, she's dead. There's no point of staying here, they would just kill me - I need to help the others. " She took the part of Chaina's chain while Chaina disappeared and found herself in the park. "At least I dressed up. It would be very embarrassing to appear in a park without clothes. I'm going to find the others, maybe they need my help."

 Witchdoctor: "So, tonight you have the chance to beat them, all or nothing. Margareth?" Margareth: "Butching." Witchdoctor: "Lauren?" Lauren: "Love!" Witchdoctor: "What will we do with the Lunata? We don't even know when we will find Chaina and did Daniela make it..."

Daniela (entered): "Daniela made it." Margareth: "You're here! Are you all right?" Daniela: "Yeah, I guess ... Chaina is dead, if a creature can die." Lauren: "What did you do to her? You suffocated her?" Daniela (avoids telling the truth): "Yes ... of course. I will arrange the Lunata." Witchdoctor: "They have already killed seventy people ... They plan to sacrifice a hundred for calling the ultimate evil." Dina: "I'll take care of Mery, I can't let her leave the house." Margareth: "The three of us against the ultimate evil ... Uh, we have to do our best. They expect us to attack tonight."

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 The last night of the red moon, the creatures are determined to come to the hundred victims tonight and invoke evil. The Black Follower, who only watched her army in the past days, has now came with them. All or nothing. The last chance to maintain the balance of good and evil.

 Knowing that Dina wouldn't be able to keep Mery for a long time, Daniela immediately went on her task. Walking on an empty bridge, she would look at the moon and think that it would be wonderful that Chaina wasn't a creature from hell, but an ordinary girl so that they could meet ... Wait, it would be too strange for the environment, she never said she was attracted to girls. She wasn't, until now.

 Her thinking had broken Lunata with her appearance. Lunata: "The person on the bridge and her nightmare, welcome to your the worst dream, the killer. My clock is ticking for you, tick-tok, tick-tok ... It's time to fly away from this bridge like a bird. (takes a watch) " Daniela didn't look at the clock but immediately defeated the Lunata and pulled watch from her hand, using her weapon against her. Daniela: "Do everything I tell you-tell me, for the beginning, how to destroy the Black Follower?" Lunata (lost): "Off with her head!" Daniela: "How?" Lunata: "E- V- I- L. It must fall. Then head will fall too." Since she couldn't pull out any more informations from Lunata she told her to self-destruct, after which Lunata had jumped off the bridge and disappeared forever. Daniela returned to overturn Mery's hypnosis.

 During that time the new pyre stood ready, but Frea wasn't fooled again so she appeared in the distance. She looked more like a zombie than what she was before, while her powers remained the same. Lauren and her husband stood beside the pile of wood, waiting for Frea to come closer. Frea: "You think you will defeat me?! No way! I will not enter the center of the circle where it is the hottest nor would it kill me! I am unbeatable!" Witchdoctor (to Lauren) :, She has to get closer and then light a fire! It will be enough to destroy her. " When she got close enough to hurt them they lit the fire. Frea: "This fire is in vain, I am equally powerful inside!" Lauren (to husband): "I hope this will work ... (kisses him with a lot of love )" Frea:" Love ... that damn emotion ... it's everywhere! I'm falling apart ... from her presence ...it's ruining me ... "

 Frea began to decay and the witchdoctor finished her spell. Frea was defeated. Lauren's husband: "Creepy." Lauren: "Then be happy you didn't see what I've seen up to now. This is just part of it."

 As she threatened, Weber reappeared before Margareth. Her hair was very long again, blacker than the darkest night. Weber: "You will not get out now ... My web will be your sarcophagus ...your scythe is in vain, you will not achieve anything if you cut off my hair, it will grow again. "Margareth:" And that's why I won't cut that. I'll cut off your other threads."

 She cut off her leg with a sharp swing, causing her to fall, then cut off her arm, her other leg and her other arm until only remained head on the body in the puddle of blue phlegm. She looked at Margareth and said through her teeth: "Come on, what are you waiting for? Cut! Finish with this, you won. Stop my bloodstream and this agony, hurry! "The last swaying killed the fourth wraith so only The Black Follower, their worst opponent in life, remained.

 Everybody gathered at Mery's place, with Mery not being at home, only terrified Dina. Margareth: "Where is she ?!" Dina: "She ran away! She took the moment of negligence and disappeared! What am I going to do now? What if she kills some child?" Lauren: "Let's go, you say there's a tracking device on her phone and you know where she is?" Dina: "Yes, she would have had a problem returning home after a party so I found her on that way." Daniela: "We have to hurry, the children are in danger."

 Bloody Mery watched a five-year old boy out the window. He slept quietly, not hearing anything. Margareth: "I set up a clock to knock backward, one of us will come near enough so Mery could see the watch ... The other two will hold her." Lauren:" I'll take a watch, she'll probably want to attack us. " Daniela: "It's going to be a problem to defeat the Black Follower, Mery will be an easier part."

 Bloody Mery headed with hand to the window, holding venomous knife in her hand. Others run closer to her, Daniela and Margareth held her while Lauren waved with a clock. One moment looking at the watch returned her back to normal. Mery(screamed when saw she holds a knife): "What are we doing here ?!" Daniela:" The boy woke up, we have to get out of here before he looks out the window. "

 There was another battle. The bloody moon, now much decreased than the full moon that was glowing several days ago, took the central part of the sky. Black Follower was determined to kill thirty people in order to summon the mistress,so she set traps on the rail in order to cause a railway accident. Black Follower: "Mistress, tonight exactly a hundred victims will be sacrificed to your honor. There will be thirty people who are missing to the number of hundred, surely they will die, because I will finish them off with an explosion. I just have to make a trap." Lauren (appears along with the others): "That will not happen." Black Follower: "Would you perhaps try to stop me? You have no power, you are unarmed. I don't understand how you even thought you would defeat me; nothing can destroy me-  neither weapons nor fire, suffocation, nor hypnosis. My mistress is an absolutely impossible to destroy and, judging by the fact that the train is approaching, you will soon see her. "Margareth:" I'll make a diversion and you think about what's next. (pulls out the scythe and fights with The Black Follower) "

Daniela: "The evil must fall ... EVIL ..." They looked at The Black Follower, seeing the shimmering on her neck. Lauren: "Well, of course, her "EVIL"necklace! The EVIL must fall! "Mery:" Since I haven't defeat anyone yet, this is the right time! " Margareth was still fighting with her scythe and Lauren and Daniela helped her, giving Mery an opportunity to get close enough to remove the necklace. Black Follower: "Noooo, return it back to me, you miserable creature!" Lauren: "The train is coming! " Margareth: "Quick, get off the rail!"

 Too weak to move, the Black Follower felt across the rail. The train was approaching until it crossed the Black Follower and beheaded her. She disappeared in the meantime, after her head rolled to the feet of the girls covering its path with blood.

 On the east sky from the night- blue turned into dark red as the hair of the Black Follower, then it was covered with a whole spectrum of colors. Sun was coming out and announced a new day.

 The girls returned home while the first rays of the sun were playing in their hair and the city was still covered by the ghostly silence. They were only sorry that they couldn't bring back the lives of seventy people, but it was somehow easier now when they were free from the Black Follower. On the way back Mery threw a clock and necklace from the bridge, hoping it was the last time to see them, and the others also wanted that this never repeat again. Finally they were free again. Mery: "I don't know about you but I will burn this dress." Margareth:" Same, mine is full of blue phlegm. " Lauren: "I'll finally go to sleep, we haven't slept well several nights!" Margareth: "I'm afraid just to think what would happen if another 30 people were killed ..."

 Daniela felt strange. She entered the apartment quietly, turning the light on and bringing the chair next to the window. The balance in the cosmos was held but she missed Chaina, no matter if she was evil it was somehow harder to lose her than whole this thing. She went to her room, tired of the battle. On the bedside was her talisman and beside it there was a message: "When you want me, put a talisman around your neck and I will come only for you."

 She did it and Chaina appeared before her. Daniela: "Chaina? You're still alive?" Chaina: "I am not, but I used my power to come for a while." Daniela: "I really didn't intend to kill you, it was a coincidence." Chaina: "I know, it's partly my fault. What should I do when your skill is great." Daniela (smiled seductive): "It's just part of everything you'll see." Chaina: "It will be a pleasure to be part of it all."

 They never heard of Black Follower anymore, no matter how afraid they were she might return from the dead. They tried to have as peaceful life as possible, except maybe wild Mery, but all this left a trail on them and their loved ones, such as Bianca who forever remembered the terrible night when Weber killed three of her friends. Lauren later became a mother, Margareth helped her daughters who became teenagers, Daniela continued to do her job and occasionally called Chaina, Mery was slowly stopping with the parties and used the money to travel with Dina.

 Nevertheless, the evil is eternal, so even the mistress of The Black Follower will not rest but maybe recreate a creature like her one day. However, this is only a presumption, but it is not excluded that the wraiths of the darkness will again be the hungry of human souls ...

The end
1/8/2018 7:55 PM
Suzana Ristic Suza
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DISSCUSION

 The story is from one part, although it should have been divided on the chapters as the first part was. For Mery's sentences I used more slang than ordinary literary speech since her character represents a young and modern person. For the first time I use jumping from the scene to scene, not giving any kind of an overture, that can be seen in the first scene with Mery which immediately jumps into the second scene with a sentence that complements the first one. I tried to control my abstraction at the time of writing.

 The idea of continuing came by chance, but I really liked the idea of writing another part, I just wanted it to be even more creepy. The main macabre thing is that, unlike the first part, here were seventy victims that weren't erased. I created the designs and appearances of the four main creatures, thinking if I could re-introduce the old characters which was definitely a good idea, the story would be less meaningful without them. The situation in the my house created the ideal conditions for those "nasty parts", I wrote them without a problem. I am immune to writing such things.

 What was not easy for me to write are the scenes with Daniela and Chaina, I'm probably going to blush when I read the story again, but it was worth it. I think they are a good couple, I plan to do something about it in the story I want to write during the year ;) . I would like to be a bit more free with writing such scenes, but I believe that it should be subtle and moderate, according to my personality.

 Character analysis relates more to old characters, given that the three years passed and some things have changed- Lauren got married, Margareth's daughters have grown up, but Mery and Daniela have remained more or less the same. Daniela is not evil but presented as someone who is attracted to what the environment (especially our, i.e. the most of places in my country) would consider unusual, perhaps even unacceptable. But, would a creature from hell fall into moment of passion? Hardly, if Daniela wasn't on her place before.

 All the names of their loved ones are revealed except for Lauren's husband, while Leonora (Margareth's ten years old daughter) appears in only one scene. I didn't want to mix religion in the story in order not to take it in the other direction, I'm not overly occupied with it and everything would be based on prayer, holy water and crosses, which would more resembling the vampire hunting :D. That's why I had to return them to what they were in the last part.

 Creatures don't have any psychological background (opposite to the main four) they are exactly that - creatures. The Black Follower also has no background neither, one of the rare characters whose feelings we don't find anything about while it's the main character, because she doesn't own them. In Chaina could be seen indications of some feelings, if we can call them that way. None of these characters were created as me, but I would like to look like Weber (I often looked at her image during the writing, I really liked her look and outfit, it could be said that she is one of my crushes from the stories ;)), all events are the work of fiction and don't try anything out because you will spend life in jail, uh ... I mean, don't be on the side of evil. There is too much evil on this planet.

 In reality, there would be plenty of police and perhaps the DNA of our heroines would be found, but - why complicating it? Another information - the red (orange) moon appears usually in August, I had that in mind while I wrote a story. Characters are called girls, although their age ranged between 20-33 (not mentioned, but it is assumed that Margaret is the oldest and Mery is the youngest).